Jumat, 15 Juli 2016

Paragraph of ''Participial phrase''


Tiring Activities

            One day, I go to somewhere with my friend in the morning at 5.00 am. We want to refresh our mind because it’s too long we work at this week. For the first, we go to the park, to the city, my friend’s house, and the last we go to the field. We feel very happy and enjoying the fresh air. We use the bicycle to go that places. There is someone on there. I look an Athlete,The athlete carrying the ball is Miroslav Klose. And evidently, he is my friend when I’m in junior high school. I also see someone who playing basketball. The boy playing basketball is my brother. There is someone over the field.The car being parked there is his. He look botheration with his car.The car parking solved by the class is very difficult. So, someone help him. I think he is his friend. My friend have a call of his phone. I hear that there is a schedule for meeting with his office’s friends. Being tired, he refused to reschedule the meeting. He ask me to go back to home, and we will. We come to home at 10.00 am.

Participial phrase:
1. The athlete
carrying the ball is Miroslav Klose.
2. The boy
playing basketball is my brother.
3. The car
being parked there is his.
4. The car parking
solved by the class is very difficult.
5.
Being tired, he refused to reschedule the meeting.

Paragraph of ''Noun Clause''


Unforgettable thing

           
I think my world is super perfect life. My name is Dzawin. I have mother, father, 2 sisters and also brother. I have a beautiful ‘’Anggora’’cat. She always follow me wherever I go. One day, in my 20th birthday party I do make a wish that I want to have a car . Blue car named INOVA. My parents don’t know about my wish that I’ve say in my heart. But, two days later, When I want to go office, my mother ask me to go to the garden.  What’s wrong Mam?’’ My mother say that ‘’You should look at the garden. There is something for you. Your father comes to office early. Can’t you?’’ Ok Mam, I reply it. When I go to the the garden I suppressed that there is a car. ‘’Wow, This car is what I want, perfect!! How can it happened? Thanks you God,’’. I say like that. Then, My Mother come. I don’t know whether she will come. ‘’Thank you Mam, I don’t know what to do to give thank to you for this car, This is my wish on my birthday party. Perfect!!’’. ‘’But you have to be a kind and clever man to work’’. Said my mother. ‘’Ok Mom,’’ I always remember for it and that’s Unforgettable. My mother  always can read whatever in my mind. I love my

Noun Clause:
1. My parents don’t know about my wish that I’ve say in my heart.
2. I don’t know whether she will come.
3. This car is
what I want
4. She always follow me
wherever I go.

Minggu, 10 Juli 2016

Summary ''Participial Phrase''



 Participial phrase
A participial phrase is a word group consisting of a present participle (also known as an -ing form) or past participle (also known as an -en form), plus any modifiers, objects, and complements. A participial phrase commonly functions as an adjective. Participial phrase dressed up like verbs, but they function as adjectives to describe noun.
Punctuate a participle phrase:
1. When a participle phrase introduces a main clause, separate the two sentence components with a comma. The pattern looks like this:
Participle Phrase + , + Main Clause
Example: Glazed with barbecue sauce, the rack of ribs lay nestled next to a pile of sweet coleslaw.
2. When a participle phrase concludes a main clause and is describing the word right in front of it, you need no punctuation to connect the two sentence parts. The pattern looks like this:
Main Clause + Ø + Participle Phrase
Example: Mariah risked petting the pit bull wagging its stub tail.
3. But when a participle phrase concludes a main clause and modifies a word farther up in the sentence, you will need a comma. The pattern looks like this:
Main Clause + , + Participle Phrase
Example: Cooper enjoyed dinner at Audrey's house, agreeing to a large slice of cherry pie even though he was full to the point of bursting.
Participle phrases are the most common modifier to misplace or dangle. In clear, logical sentences, you will find modifiers right next to the words they describe.
‘’Shouting with happiness, William celebrated his chance to interview at SunTrust’’.
Notice that the participle phrase sits right in front of William, the one doing the shouting.
If too much distance separates a modifier and its target, the modifier is misplaced.
‘’Draped neatly on a hanger, William borrowed Grandpa's old suit to wear to the interview’’
The suit, not William, is on the hanger!
The modifier must come closer to the word it is meant to describe:
‘’For the interview, William borrowed Grandpa's old suit, which was draped neatly on a hanger’’.
If the sentence fails to include a target, the modifier is dangling.
‘’Straightening his tie and smoothing his hair, the appointment time for the interview had finally arrived’’.
The conclusion, I assume William is about to interview, but where is he in the sentence? We need a target for the participle phrase straightening his tie and smoothing his hair. Straightening his tie and smoothing his hair, William was relieved that the appointment time for the interview had finally arrived.

Jumat, 17 Juni 2016

Paragraph of ''Subjunctive''



                                                            Subjunctive Clause 
  
            Smoking ban debate in Indonesia won’t be ended easly.  Indonesia society have different views in responding the smoking ban. If The latest one is MUI illegitimate fatwa which is responded with a variety of different opinions from the society. The following is discussion if the pros and cons of smoking, especially smoking in public area. I would rather agree with the  people agree with MUI statement argue thet a lot of negative effects produced by smoking, such as causing death, lung damage, liver and heart attack, importance, and a lot of kinds of cancer. These diseases can cause death. Again, not only the active smokers who are affected, but also the people around them (passive smokers) get the impact. Based on this that study, the MUI states that smoking is forbidden. Especially in public area. As if the  smokers still argue a self-defense arguments. They argue thet smoking can help to refresh their mind, create some creative idea, relieve nervousness and fatigue. I wish, they argue that smoking can establish or togetherness. In addition, they also argue that the smoking ban means also closing the tobacco company which cause a massive unemployment because many employess work there.

Subjunctive in sentences:
1.I would rather agree with the  people agree with MUI statement argue thet a lot of negative effects produced by smoking, such as causing death, lung damage, liver and heart attack, importance, and a lot of kinds of cancer.
2.As if the  smokers still argue a self-defense arguments.
3. I wish, they argue that smoking can establish or togetherness

Kamis, 16 Juni 2016

Paragraph of ''Adjective Clause''




                                                Adjective Clause

            Do you remember any incidents in Indonesia ? Still you remember incidents in Krakatoa? Krakatoa, wich is volcano on an Indonesia Island, exploded in 1883. The noise that accompanied the explosions  was tremendous. People who lived 3,520 kilometers heard it and may people who lived are able to avoid the tragedy.
On August 27, 1883, two thirds of the Krakatoa eruption collapsed in a chain, to eliminate most of the islands around it. Seismic activity remained lasted until February 1884. This eruption is one of the most deadly volcanic eruptions and the most destructive in history, causing at least 36,417 deaths as a result of the eruption and the resulting tsunami. The impact of this eruption could also be felt throughout the world. Many people are felt and cant forgetting the tragedy. The thousands whom the resulting tidal wave killed live on the neighboring island of java. People still speak of the day when the explosions’ occurred. The ocean covered the place where the volcano had been. Only scientists can explain the reason why the disaster happened. 

   Adjective Clause:
1. Krakatoa, wich is volcano on an Indonesia Island, exploded in 1883. The noise that accompanied the explosions  was tremendous.
2.People who lived 3,520 kilometers heard it and may people who lived are able to avoid the tragedy.
3. The noise that accompanied the explosions  was tremendous.
4.The thousands whom the resulting tidal wave killed live on the neighboring island of java. People still speak of the day when the explosions’ occurred.
5.The ocean covered the place where the volcano had been.
6.Only scientists can explain the reason why the disaster happened.